verjamon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clouds]

An error i have seen is that you use loops without context and with not exact bpm or key of the song.
let me explain.
if your song is in F (as an example) and the loop you are going to use are in A minor, then it wont sound good, and the exact with the bpm, those loops are creater for a loop faster than the one you originally put, the piano and the synths.

Gougou responds:

Ok thanks for the help :)

[Luxurious hotel]

it haves like, loud spikes that are really bothering and incomplete parts.
is like experimenting sounds, its, its quite weird, but u can get better of course.
im looking forward to review your songs ;)

Gougou responds:

Thank you :)

[Tesla's Labratory]

These are some good ambient sounds.

NaTaS-X responds:

Thank you very much :D

[KefirYT - Basic Beat]

a bass would be great in the loop, overall now bad for a test.

KefirYT responds:

I've added the basses, it's just quiet.

[SH14 - Empty Space]

needs more variety but its overall good.

Shadowhazard14 responds:

Thanks

[Proxima]

this is a really weird experiment.

I love it

Kalviter responds:

Thank you! Glad you like it :)

[Firestarters: Piano (Aydin's Chilled Version)]

Man, high level chill, I absolutely love it :D

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Thanks for taking the time to check it out dude and awesome! :D

[Raining Neon]

I love how u can mix instruments without a problem, but it sounds a little off and strange when it sounds SFX without any sense.
Is a very good song too, wish it was longer

IndustryStandard responds:

Yeah I don't know why i put that weird breathing sound in there, but i like it personally, i think it kinda sets the stage for the instrumentation since it comes in so suddenly. I've got a few ideas since posting the track, maybe I'll mess around with a b-side version at some point.

[Hellfire]

I love the drum beat
The starting lead is cool
Maybe the start is not that powerfull considering this is a DNB song.
But then, it goes better!
I like it, but some melodys are quite strange to hear

CrisTheGamer responds:

Thank you! Yeah, melodies are out of key, I wanted it to sound "dark" but it may sound strange. I'm going to work harder for my next Dn'B track :)

[1213321_Fun House]

at first the bass is discordant, a lot, in the 2º part it goes a lot better, but the piano melody is quite strange.
Your drops are alright

CryptVoice responds:

thank