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Me gusta mucho el cambio de tono de la canción,tienes un estilo muy propio, buena! :)

An error i have seen is that you use loops without context and with not exact bpm or key of the song.
let me explain.
if your song is in F (as an example) and the loop you are going to use are in A minor, then it wont sound good, and the exact with the bpm, those loops are creater for a loop faster than the one you originally put, the piano and the synths.

Gougou responds:

Ok thanks for the help :)

it haves like, loud spikes that are really bothering and incomplete parts.
is like experimenting sounds, its, its quite weird, but u can get better of course.
im looking forward to review your songs ;)

Gougou responds:

Thank you :)

i prefeer intoxicated, but it's good

Better, i like the lyrics and the base is really catchy

I don't know if its just to low or if its compressed as hell, but is hard to listen to some aspects of the drums, but is really good with that "chill vibe" it has, the bass at 1:50 it's really weird into that build up, its overall good.

I think that you could do some really good stuff with only more knowledge about musical theory and not using a lot of samples.
sampling is good, but if you use samples as your main melodies, pads or leads, yeah, its not going to be worth at all.
Use drum samples and percussion samples, even percussion loops like many other artist in music, but be yourself and go make your style with your own sounds, even with the pads.

Intro sounds really epic, i like the filtered snare, make it sound really cinematic, and the little leads, good material there, the heartbeat for the drop is really cool, i dont really like the pluck in the drop, it destroys the really good epic vibe of the song, but then you fix it mixing it with the lead, i like this.

These are some good ambient sounds.

NaTaS-X responds:

Thank you very much :D

i wish the intro was shorter, hearing the vocoder for a minute with some filter effects wasn't that right, the track is 2 minutes long and the intro last for 1 minute with only 1 sound on, drop lacks of power, its chill, but the build-up made the track a little tense and theres no release to that, i like the "glitch" effects in the drop, but the vocoder makes it a little rough to hear, i would improve by doing some different melodies with the vocoder, or with some vocal chops.
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Im Ranboku also known as verjamon Im a spanish musician
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José Javier @verjamon

Age 23, Male

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Joined on 12/5/15

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